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| Singing and Songwriting Discussion A forum for those who express themselves with their voice or writing talents. |
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03-17-2009, 01:02 PM
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Tie me up! Untie me!
Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Coastal town, dislike the beach... -_-
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Hay hay hay. Got some more lyrics as the title suggests. I should really be studying but I am just way too cool and too much of a man so I decided to write lyrics about my feelings >_>
This is called "Let the Eyes Roll Back" There痴 a slight desire To stay beneath the ocean A part of me that wants to Let my skin turn blue I知 happy with Letting my eyes roll Back into my head I知 moving away from Desperation and back to Running away with my tail In-between my legs I知 happy with Letting my eyes roll Back into my head I知 happy with Letting my life stroll With nothing ahead I知 happy with Letting my eyes roll Back into my head |
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03-17-2009, 01:58 PM
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Jerky guy who thinks he's a rocker...
 
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Meh... I like your other ones better but this is ok...
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03-17-2009, 02:37 PM
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Pshaw!
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Pshaw, baphomet. These ones I like the most so far.
 Get with the game.Anyway, yeah, I like them. I could actually see this song being similar to The Smiths musically because the lyrics definitely remind me of them.
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03-20-2009, 12:27 AM
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arexzek
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I Like your lyrics!
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