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05-31-2009, 08:57 PM
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The Red Telephone
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Hey guys,
last night I was watching CSI while playing my guitar, and then I had this idea of writing a song about a manhunt. 5 hours later, here what I came up with : See the blood on your hands, See how it misled you down here Face recognition, fingerprints All over the crime scene Cover up all the tracks, Make it look like a suicide He would no longer see her face So he waited till she got asleep Something snapped in your mind Things got out of control He's the suspect of the list And the jury found him guilty See the blood on your hands, See how it misled you down here, Justice makers got you trapped Now you'd better turn yourself in, Snipers on the roof Looking for a clear shot to take you down, You load the gun, got it cocked Shot yourself a bullet through the brain I hope you'll have a great time listening to my song, just as great as watching a CSI episode 
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So I was watching CSI last night, and came up with something about the episode I'd just seen. Wanna hear how it sounds like ? Here you go. "...He waited till she got asleep..." 
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06-01-2009, 01:55 AM
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Play the music, not the instrument
 
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Gave off kind of a creepy vibe
 I liked it though, I think some of the lines (rhythm wise) didn't go together like: "He would no longer see her face So he waited till she got asleep" sounded odd. Other than that it was good.  I also think there should be a 30 second thing of hysterical laughing at the end after the lyrics that fades away with the guitar. If you're going for a creepy vibe.
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06-04-2009, 07:52 PM
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One Step Beyond...
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Excellent idea! I love the way you combine a trashy acoustic shuffle feel with the eerie synthesiser sounds, and the vocals sound very good. Nice work!
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