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Old 09-30-2011, 04:53 AM   #1
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Here are some lyrics I wrote recently, I was hoping for someone to help me with a title:

Please let me know what you think as well.

I've been thinking about everything you said which wasn't much,
but it's been melting in my mind and makes me wish I wasn't such
a little child in your eyes with both my feet still on the ground,
and every time I see your picture I just wish I'd never found
you as you were, the strangest angel that you always seemed to be,
just the miserable perfection that you'll always be to me.

I think I've spent too long on all the times we never had
but every time I play this record I remember just how badly
I was swept under the surface of the slowly turning tide
along the edges of the ocean in the world in your eyes,
and every day my perfect picture of you cracks a little more,
but I still can't bring myself to let the pieces touch the floor.

I'm trying to move on now but it's harder than it seems
when every time I shut my eyes I see you burning in my dreams
and then I fall into your arms in all the pictures in my head
and when I wake up by myself I wish the both of us we're dead.
But just to die with you beside me is the greatest way to go
because I hate you and I love you more than you could ever know.
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Cool lyrics
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