Original Song - Two Piece Acoustic

bigfredfresh · 01-29-2011, 07:33 PM

UPDATE: Embedded video is below..thanks a lot, Music Man.

We're a new band from northern BC, been together a couple months now. Working on a CD planned to be recorded in May. Constructive criticism and feedback are GREATLY appreciated. Thanks a lot, good people!

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gD1x62E015k

Embedded wouldn't work? Any one know what could be up? Thanks again!

MusicMan · 01-30-2011, 06:14 AM

Testing embedding.

Worked for me, youtube may have been having server issues when you tried it, I don't know.

I like the sound but I couldn't hear all of the lyrics. Any chance you could post them?

bigfredfresh · 01-31-2011, 05:41 AM

Thanks for the help with the video brother man.

There is a man on the channel 4 news Telling new lies to you today
He’s Putting new ideas in your head as you sip your morning coffee
It’s the same bullshit they bin tellin us for years
Somebody’s dying somebody’s hurt somebody lived
But hey forget the facts let just tell em what we seen.
Mmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmhmmmmmm

Don’t make me want to believe in conspiracies
Don’t make me lose my faith in humanity
Life is bigger than anything we can see
Don’t watch the news don’t watch the news don’t watch the news

Like a cats eye in the dark that/it can see past the shadows
You can see right through that solitary made up face
But He’s just the delivery man you can’t berate him for being nieve
Political battles & military strife
Just go ahead and tell me exactly what i (don’t? ) want to hear
Mmmmmmhmmmmmmhmmmmmm

Like a dog on a leash I lay out
howling at the moon
swear i saw that face before
in a dusty old saloon
times change and the way we’re going
end time seems so soon
its what you choose to do
dont watch the news

MusicMan · 01-31-2011, 02:16 PM

Cool, thanks for the lyrics. I like the song quite a bit. If it were something I wrote, I might tweak the lyrics in a few small spots just to make the phrasing more clear and/or flow well. But it's a pretty good effort and a solid song that I'm glad you shared here.

bigfredfresh · 01-31-2011, 06:10 PM

That's the beauty of writing lyrics! Phrasing is so personal

You do good work here friend.

Dynamic Threads · 02-02-2011, 06:57 PM

Not what I'm in to personally, but it sounds nice. Video took a decade to load though.

bigfredfresh · 02-03-2011, 06:32 AM

@Dynamic Threads

Appreciate the honest man, we all got our own style. Much love.

01-29-2011, 07:33 PM	#1
bigfredfresh Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Rep Power: 16	UPDATE: Embedded video is below..thanks a lot, Music Man. We're a new band from northern BC, been together a couple months now. Working on a CD planned to be recorded in May. Constructive criticism and feedback are GREATLY appreciated. Thanks a lot, good people! Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gD1x62E015k Embedded wouldn't work? Any one know what could be up? Thanks again! Last edited by bigfredfresh : 01-31-2011 at 05:38 AM. Reason: Embedded video added.

01-30-2011, 06:14 AM	#2
MusicMan "Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Inside your head Posts: 8,213 Thanks: 586 Thanked 555 Times in 476 Posts Rep Power: 500	Testing embedding. Worked for me, youtube may have been having server issues when you tried it, I don't know. I like the sound but I couldn't hear all of the lyrics. Any chance you could post them? __________________ Rules! A definite must-read The Music Showcase is the best place to share your music here, you can even embed Youtube videos. Send me a PM if you need any help with anything.

01-31-2011, 02:16 PM	#4
MusicMan "Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Inside your head Posts: 8,213 Thanks: 586 Thanked 555 Times in 476 Posts Rep Power: 500	Cool, thanks for the lyrics. I like the song quite a bit. If it were something I wrote, I might tweak the lyrics in a few small spots just to make the phrasing more clear and/or flow well. But it's a pretty good effort and a solid song that I'm glad you shared here. __________________ Rules! A definite must-read The Music Showcase is the best place to share your music here, you can even embed Youtube videos. Send me a PM if you need any help with anything.

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Dynamic Threads Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Western New York Posts: 268 Thanks: 12 Thanked 40 Times in 28 Posts Rep Power: 37	Not what I'm in to personally, but it sounds nice. Video took a decade to load though. __________________ Dynamic Threads On SoundCloud Dynamic Threads music on Last FM; Free MP3s Y'all Dynamic Threads on Myspace

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01-31-2011, 05:41 AM	#3
bigfredfresh Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Rep Power: 16	Thanks for the help with the video brother man. There is a man on the channel 4 news Telling new lies to you today He’s Putting new ideas in your head as you sip your morning coffee It’s the same bullshit they bin tellin us for years Somebody’s dying somebody’s hurt somebody lived But hey forget the facts let just tell em what we seen. Mmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmhmmmmmm Don’t make me want to believe in conspiracies Don’t make me lose my faith in humanity Life is bigger than anything we can see Don’t watch the news don’t watch the news don’t watch the news Like a cats eye in the dark that/it can see past the shadows You can see right through that solitary made up face But He’s just the delivery man you can’t berate him for being nieve Political battles & military strife Just go ahead and tell me exactly what i (don’t? ) want to hear Mmmmmmhmmmmmmhmmmmmm Like a dog on a leash I lay out howling at the moon swear i saw that face before in a dusty old saloon times change and the way we’re going end time seems so soon its what you choose to do dont watch the news

01-31-2011, 06:10 PM	#5
bigfredfresh Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Rep Power: 16	That's the beauty of writing lyrics! Phrasing is so personal You do good work here friend.

02-03-2011, 06:32 AM	#7
bigfredfresh Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Rep Power: 16	@Dynamic Threads Appreciate the honest man, we all got our own style. Much love.

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