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Mycheaprecords · 10-22-2008, 05:58 PM

Hey guys,

here's a new song I wrote yesterday... It's about my 1st trip (and probably the last I'll ever have, given how hard it was for me to find a "square").

I didn't write this song while using it because I was out of town.
I wrote this song about what I felt. It's not expressed only by the lyrics, I tried to shape the structure of the song with that idea.

Anyway, It took me about 3 hours to make everything sound clean (my webcam microphone screws every sound, I did my best to fix everything), although it's a short song.
I know, probably a lot of you who will listen to this song, won't like it. It's okay, but if you're just curious, here's the pattern of the song :

1. It starts slowly, along with the effects of the substance.
2. 1st verse : hallucinations.
3. Everything stops, and starts over.
4. 2nd verse : pure delirium. I just wrote what I remember I had thought, though I can't tell you why I thought about those things

Lyrics (for those who can't understand my F* french accent)

Music
deep and blue
Hiding, Holding in
Pictures in your mouth
going down your eyes

Building a building
Driving in subways
African Airlines
Jewish and arab
American Dream
Faster and Faster
People don't do drugs
They just make acid

Aqualung · 10-22-2008, 06:11 PM

I like it! Pure delerium FTW.

Mycheaprecords · 10-22-2008, 06:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aqualung

I like it! Pure delerium FTW.

Thanks Aqua for listening !!!
So what about you ? Any new song of yours ? Come on, go tell your dad we want more !!!

Aqualung · 10-22-2008, 06:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mycheaprecords

Thanks Aqua for listening !!!
So what about you ? Any new song of yours ? Come on, go tell your dad we want more !!!

I'm at college now, hundreds of miles away from him, so I don't have any new ones.

I'll have to find somebody here who makes music... Hmmm....

Mycheaprecords · 10-23-2008, 05:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aqualung

I'm at college now, hundreds of miles away from him, so I don't have any new ones.

I'll have to find somebody here who makes music... Hmmm....

WE should definitely give it a shot you and me... what do you think?
I know you're not into psychedelic music, but it's not a problem for me, I can do other things like Pop music

Aqualung · 10-24-2008, 01:20 AM

I don't have any instruments here.

lol

Cirrus_Minor · 10-24-2008, 01:51 AM

It was definately interesting to say the least. You have a very interesting touch you put on all of your work. I did really like the backing vocals in the second verse; I thought they fit extremely well. I also liked the guitar work, the simple layers mesh well. Anyways, cool tune man, I enjoyed it.

BTWriter · 10-24-2008, 02:08 AM

Hahaha pretty entertaining, and I really liked the sound of the second verse.

RickenbackerBassPlayer · 10-24-2008, 02:14 AM

Really nice. Lyrics were good, nice guitar too. Sounded pretty good "mixed wise". The only thing I did not like was the rest you do around :41. I never really liked that sound where it seems like the song is over then it starts back up.

10-22-2008, 05:58 PM	#1
Mycheaprecords The Red Telephone Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: in the X-files Posts: 421 Thanks: 191 Thanked 52 Times in 45 Posts Rep Power: 50	Hey guys, here's a new song I wrote yesterday... It's about my 1st trip (and probably the last I'll ever have, given how hard it was for me to find a "square"). I didn't write this song while using it because I was out of town. I wrote this song about what I felt. It's not expressed only by the lyrics, I tried to shape the structure of the song with that idea. Anyway, It took me about 3 hours to make everything sound clean (my webcam microphone screws every sound, I did my best to fix everything), although it's a short song. I know, probably a lot of you who will listen to this song, won't like it. It's okay, but if you're just curious, here's the pattern of the song : 1. It starts slowly, along with the effects of the substance. 2. 1st verse : hallucinations. 3. Everything stops, and starts over. 4. 2nd verse : pure delirium. I just wrote what I remember I had thought, though I can't tell you why I thought about those things Lyrics (for those who can't understand my F french accent)* Music deep and blue Hiding, Holding in Pictures in your mouth going down your eyes Building a building Driving in subways African Airlines Jewish and arab American Dream Faster and Faster People don't do drugs They just make acid __________________ Check out my latest song in the Music Showcase people! Last edited by Mycheaprecords : 01-19-2009 at 05:25 PM.

10-22-2008, 06:11 PM	#2
Aqualung Pshaw! Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Washington Posts: 11,548 Thanks: 527 Thanked 731 Times in 684 Posts Rep Power: 271	I like it! Pure delerium FTW. __________________ Here we go. Mushu cereal for breakfast with duck sauce.

10-24-2008, 01:20 AM	#6
Aqualung Pshaw! Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Washington Posts: 11,548 Thanks: 527 Thanked 731 Times in 684 Posts Rep Power: 271	I don't have any instruments here. lol __________________ Here we go. Mushu cereal for breakfast with duck sauce.

10-24-2008, 02:14 AM	#9
RickenbackerBassPlayer Play the music, not the instrument Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Behind You Posts: 3,614 Thanks: 129 Thanked 170 Times in 160 Posts Rep Power: 129	Really nice. Lyrics were good, nice guitar too. Sounded pretty good "mixed wise". The only thing I did not like was the rest you do around :41. I never really liked that sound where it seems like the song is over then it starts back up. __________________ Make sure to read the Rules for posting. Check out the KMA Review team thread post if interested. If you have any problems please feel free to Send me a message.. "Music is a higher revelation than all wisdom and philosophy." - Ludwig Van Beethoven

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10-24-2008, 01:51 AM	#7
Cirrus_Minor Premium Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 602 Thanks: 194 Thanked 92 Times in 77 Posts Rep Power: 91	It was definately interesting to say the least. You have a very interesting touch you put on all of your work. I did really like the backing vocals in the second verse; I thought they fit extremely well. I also liked the guitar work, the simple layers mesh well. Anyways, cool tune man, I enjoyed it.

10-24-2008, 02:08 AM	#8
BTWriter Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Rep Power: 18	Hahaha pretty entertaining, and I really liked the sound of the second verse.

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