andyroid20

Please have a listen to our demos. There are some acoustic tracks and some indie ish tracks. Can't quite determine a particular genre. They are recorded roughly as we have just been getting an idea what we want em to sound like so apologies for the quality. We have also not recorded any percussion track as of yet.
Please keep these things in mind whilst listening.

Andy of Vita Luna

So you know what they are about.

"Where I belong" is a slow acoustic duet with nice harmonies
"regrets" is quite dark with some some very atmospheric sounds, great bass
"Babylon" is an acoustic singer/songwriter style
"Release me" has some electronic sounds and a few vocal harmonies
"Taste of hunger" is the most rocking with a 2 guitar solo and some gritty vocals.

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flightlessthoughts

Here's my 2 cents:
Where I Belong - it was a bit long for me. If it is going to go on for 7 minutes, I would suggest being more "aggressive" with the vocals and the guitar alike. I like the basic music tho, and the harmonies (while off here and there) were a nice touch.

Regrets - my favorite of the songs. The ambient noise was very fitting, and the vocals sounded the most natural on this song.

Babylon - More guitar in the mix is needed. The lyrics are well done. The whole song seems to be lacking a bit of low-end. Pretty good song tho.

Release Me - I like this song. The guitar is nice. The chorus, "release me", gets a bit screechy now and again, like the vocalist is just over-reaching his range a bit. Practice/ vocal exercises could easily remedy that.

Taste of Hunger - The guitar solos were cool. The whole song sounded a bit rough on the recording/ mixing end, but that is forgivable in a demo. Over-all, a good song. It sounds like you could use to be a bit tighter together on this song, parts of it sounded a little sloppy.

I hope that I wasn't overly negative or anything. I wasn't trying to be down on you guys or anything. Sounds better than the stuff I record. I was just trying to be constructive.

Keep up the good work.

Cheers

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andyroid20

Cheers for the comments. We thought the same about where I belong and its going to be sped up a bit. Your right about the vocals. We didn't do many takes so when we do em properly the vocals will be spot on.
Take care
Andy